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  1. #1
    DaevaDude's Avatar


    Tsameti, playing Dicky, is doing a wonderful job of roleplaying fear frenzy, which his character experienced after having someone flick a lighter right in his face.

    First there's this post...

    Please excuse us, we are having technical difficulties...


    Dicky's fist slams into a kid's chest, knocking him out of the way.

    We apologize for the interruption of our usually scheduled programming...


    Hissing! Wailing! Keening! Screaming!

    We ask you for your patience as we work to restore our service to the level of quality you have come to expect...


    Wham! The door slams open. Night air, cool air. Cannot stop, cannot stop.

    Thank you, and have a nice day.


    followed up by this:

    Well ladies and gentlemen, it looks like we have an excellent race for you tonight!

    That's right Bill, we've got some real talent on the track.

    Right John, it's Richard DeBruyn. Now you may not have heard much about him yet, but what's got us so excited are his spectacular qualifying times.

    Yes Bill, truly spec-

    Very good.


    - really spectacular.

    Oh! Looks like we've actually begun now.

    Yes the race has started, good golly, look at him weaving through the parking lot.

    Wow John, what a demanding level of agility that takes to get around an Izuzu like that.

    I know Bill, although whoops! It almost looks like he's circling that Mazda...

    Which-

    Yes he is! I think he might have gotten lost.

    You know you might be right-

    Well-

    Wait OK, he's back on track again. He's going to have to make up for lost time.

    Here's his chance, the fence vault. If he climbs over-

    OH my GOD! He's jumping-

    OH!

    - and he doesn't clear it! He does not clear the fence!

    That has got to hurt.

    You'd better believe it, John.


    Truly wonderful stuff... it captures the nature of frenzy while also being fun and amusing as hell to read. I literally LOL this morning reading both of these.

    And Frost, playing Rosuto, followed up with this:

    Rosuto dashes after Richard, close behind D'Wayne, trying to catch him. The little shit was fast, but her small stature made it easy to weave in and out of the cars. They needed to catch him before he ran into the street and got himself hit by a car or attacked someone who got in his way or........

    A multitude of possabilities ran through her mind, none of them ending in anything good. It only served to spurr her on and run faster.


    That one does a very good job of capturing how a vampire - particularly one concerned about the Masquerade - might react to another vampire's frenzy.

    Well done, all!

    The thread itself can be found here:
    http://nwod.org/forum/showthread.php?t=1765

  2. #2
    Fractured's Avatar


    hilarious.

  3. #3
    tsameti's Avatar


    I'm hoping Rosu catches Dicky before his lizard brain remembers he's got Celerity.

    That'll be hard to explain to people.

  4. #4
    Forn Clakes's Avatar


    Bloody brilliant!

  5. #5
    BloodiedClaws's Avatar

    Kharn

    made me laugh pretty hard, good stuff Tsa!

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    Breefolk

    I was laughing so hard I failed my own personal composure check to see if I could respond. Truly brilliant.

  7. #7
    B


    Really original way to handle it. +1 internet for you!

  8. #8
    tsameti's Avatar


    but I already have one internet... maybe I'll regift it for christmas.

    thanks!

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