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shouldabeenadog
Werewolf ST
Joined: 16 Dec 2008
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Location: Cleveland, OH
Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:11 am
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 February Werewolf ST critique
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Its that time of the month again. The time for you to hit me with all your pent up rage and aggression. Let loose your fury and anguish. Drop the mad props too if its accurate.
In short, tell me what you like, what you don't like, what you felt changed from january (and if it was good or bad). Finally, if you really enjoyed a scene, tell me why.
[sickeningly sweet voice] And I'll give you an extra xp *dangles it on a chain* if you post.
Lastly, the disclaimers: I won't hold anyone responsible for what they post here about me. No retribution will be given. If you are uncomfertable with what you have to say, then please PM it to me.
~Dog (the first and only)
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Detective Seargent O'Connell
Mrs. Scotts BP: 1
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roadnottaken
Scribe
Joined: 22 Jan 2009
Posts: 333
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19.00 Experience
Location: Cleveland, OH
Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:50 am
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My character's current scene definitely has that creepiness factor. Keep it up.
I think I would like to see some more interactions with the NPC's, though. Just as long as the werewolf characters don't end up killing each other. 
Over all, you're definitely doing a great job, though.
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Matthew Greene
Purity 1, Glory 3, Wisdom 1, Cunning 1
Health 8; Essence 10/9; WP 6/5
Feet of Mist
Animus, SL:2 scar
Health 8; Mana 12/11; WP 7/6
Active spells: Second Sight, Organic Resilience,
Transform Self, Spirit Tongue
Twilight Familiar (wolf spirit)
Health 7; Essence 10/10; WP 5/5
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Nightroad
Novice
Joined: 30 Dec 2008
Posts: 486
Karma: -3
20.00 Experience
Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:49 pm
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Yeah I am liking what is going on.
Although a hint or two about how to find those DAMN RATS would be nice.
Would also like more interaction with NPCs. doesn't even have to be other werewolves.
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[Werewolf]
Taylor Roads, SL:2 Blue Eyes
Honor 3, Glory 1
[Mage]
Blackfire
*Jacket(Armor 3)
*Lighter(Fire)
*rapier +2 dur.
Active Spells
1. Wand (celestial fire -casting 7 -paradox 2)
2. Wand (celestial fire -casting 7 -paradox 2)
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Gregory Farland
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wolfman1911
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Joined: 26 Jan 2009
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5.00 Experience
Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:56 pm
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I don't know if I should be posting right now, since I can't give my thoughts on how the game changed over the month, because I wasn't here last month. I will give my impressions anyway.
Let me start out by saying that Werewolf was the reason I made an account on this site, and I haven't been disappointed. The stuff I was worried about has been taken care of without any fuss.
I can't really complain about anything.
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Jason Stanton: Prot 1, BP 1
Steven WhiteLightning: Glory 1, Honor 1, Wisdom 1
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Dredloke
Requiem ST
Joined: 22 Aug 2008
Posts: 2700
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Location: Melbouring
Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:11 pm
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Issues behind the scenes are handled quickly. I would agree with some more NPC love and maybe even giving a little more hints when people are activly trying. PM some die rolls to people.
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ParanoidAndroid
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Joined: 31 Dec 2008
Posts: 56
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Location: Montreal, Canada
Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:31 pm
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My thought can be summed up as pretty much the same as Wolfman1911.
I can haz free XPs nao pleeze?
Oh, all right, I'll put more... 
You answer PMs fast, your posts set the mood very nicely, and I have to say I get the same feeling from you that I get when I GM (Call it my Merit : Unseen sense (Good ST)); That is to say, half planning, half off the top of the head; Which is good. Not too rigid, but not entirely random either.
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Last edited by ParanoidAndroid on Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:43 pm; edited 1 time in total
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shouldabeenadog
Werewolf ST
Joined: 16 Dec 2008
Posts: 1470
Karma: +2
55.50 Experience
Location: Cleveland, OH
Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:37 pm
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ParanoidAndroid
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Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:43 pm
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Edited, and removed. Sorry boss.
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Gwen "Last" : Giant, Bone Shadow Itaheur Wisdom 2, Purity 1.
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shouldabeenadog
Werewolf ST
Joined: 16 Dec 2008
Posts: 1470
Karma: +2
55.50 Experience
Location: Cleveland, OH
Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:46 pm
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Frost
Master ST
Joined: 15 Jul 2008
Posts: 2494
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Location: Melboring
Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:20 pm
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Can't say I have any issues as of yet. I think the first change scene was very well done and I was happy with it (mainly because I didn't have to come up with everything that happened, that was SO nice)
So, thumbs up from me.
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Sheriff Ishani Naetesh, Gabriel Marcus, Shadow, Lioni Dupree, Veritas, Bella Orchid, Valencia, Zen, Jamie Jones (JJ), Lisaundra Frost, Karma, Maxine Fairchild/Ankh, Lavender Rose, Detective Venessa Blas
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Thorfred
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Joined: 13 Feb 2009
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:10 am
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As I am new here too, can't really say what has changed. So far I'm VERY pleased with this game. I liked very much how you represented the forest spirit that Grip-of-Steel and Matthew met. It made me sweat to come up with polite speeches (at least they felt more like speeches than questions etc.) so that we might live to tell the tale. I don't know how powerful that spirit actually was and don't think it would have killed us anyway, but it felt very dangerous and very alien (not he/she... just IT)... Just as a spirit should.
And to mention something from the OOC side. I like the fact that you answer quickly to questions and such. I have to say that your tone is much less friendly than most of other STs, GMs, DMs and such that I have met. One time I got a bit negative and detached impression about something you commented, though I don't remember the exactly what was it about. That all is probably your personality/personal style and it doesn't bother me, it just takes a while to get used to.
All in all, keep up the good work!
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Renown: Honor 1, Glory 1
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JacobRussoff
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Joined: 09 Jan 2009
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:14 pm
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Great time. I am liking it.
Not sure this is the place to ask this - but I read that we should post to only one normal IC thread and one 'sticky' IC thread. When I first jumped in there was a sticky thread going on - but there has not been one since then. Should there always be a sticky thread going on?
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shouldabeenadog
Werewolf ST
Joined: 16 Dec 2008
Posts: 1470
Karma: +2
55.50 Experience
Location: Cleveland, OH
Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:22 pm
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BloodiedClaws
Apprentice
Joined: 11 Jan 2009
Posts: 200
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10.00 Experience
Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:02 am
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so far i'm loving the game i'm in, and if it wasn't for shoulda i probably would have never found out about this site cause my search-fu sucks at finding anything i really want to find, so thank you for this shoulda!
as for as an ST, i think your doing good and my only negative comment would be that the game seems to be running kinda slow, but thats probably more our faults than yours
overall nothing but good 
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Jeremy "Sunshine" Williams, Obf 3, Pro 3 BP 1
Mateo Benavidez "Iron", Glory 2, Purity 1, Honor 1
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