Mable might have looked wholesome but tonight it was not working.
Jeff Maverick struggled to haul himself upright. His suspicious eyes are flushed with embarrassed anger.
"I'm fine. I have a car. I don't need you. Now will you let me fucking go?"
His tumultuous emotions seethed in his voice, civility stretched to its ultimate limit.
He made for his car again and if there is no further opposition he'll dive into its comparative security like a cornered animal. The car roars to life with a grind of gears. The P.I. will be so desperate to escape that he'll bang and scrape the vehicle along the alley as he reverses madly out into the street.
You have the memory chip. You have a bag filled with surveillance equipment. You have physical evidence that the Nox was being watched.
Unless anyone wishes to do anything more, I am going to wrap up this scene. Feel free to continue the story in a new one
Nice job