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shouldabeenadog
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:59 am
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If you are a werewolf player, please harken and listen to my plea.

I am always striving to be better, and to be better, I must know both my successes, and flaws. Tell me what I did wrong, and what I did right in this month.
Everyone who contributes will get at least an addition 1 xp for the month. (this will not break the cap of 15, just give you a little boost).
Hit me with your best shot. Do not pull punches. I want the full, unbridled truth.
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roadnottaken
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 1:53 pm
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Well, since my cover's already blown . . .

I miss the "What's going on? *looks around nervously*" factor from your previous campaign, especially the intro. Especially the dream sequences. Maybe I just haven't had much chance to explore the current setting, but so far my character hasn't encountered anything too out of the ordinary (unless you count Sentry's antics).

But then again, I'm too glad to be back in a Werewolf game to find anything to complain too loudly about.

Did the intro thread intentionally play on one of my character's greatest weaknesses?
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Nightroad
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 2:51 pm
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Great job so far.

Things I like: I for once do not feel like some small fish in a big pond.

-The NPC characters are pretty cool but we don't see them hardly at all.

Things i don't really like: I haven't had a fight yet. I was expecting at least a small scuffle with the rat thing.

Other then that it is going really well.

Keep up the damn good work.
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Frost
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:10 pm
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Ok Dog, at the end of my post I would like you to scroll back to the top of my post and remind yourself: You asked for it.

First, the positive: I enjoy the personal attention I see you pay to the characters. I like your storyline so far and I thinik you have adjusted very well to the PBP STing style.

I also like your attention to detail.


Now the negative: You need to listen to your players, pay attention to what they tell you in PMs, IMs, and posts.


I would also like to say that Werewolf in PBP is a rather difficult venue to run. For one reason, combat in PBP can be tedius and confusing. However, it is also important to remember that Werewolf does have it's political aspects.

I, personally, would like to see something more of a mental challenge in the works rather then one geared toward a physical solution.

And that's my two cents.
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shouldabeenadog
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:35 pm
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Good stuff all around, keep it coming.
Since Lady Frost brought it up, please let me know through PM if there is something in particular that you feel I ignored you on, and hopefully i may be able to correct it, or at least become aware of it.
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Dredloke
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:41 pm
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Hey bud

Honestly hate doing this because well I don't think I am the best to rate anyone....my stories are not worthy of the paper bag they are written out on.....


The stories are great thus far...

I think the Alpha pack needs to be a little more active in placing new Wolves to help Balance the packs for the coming war.

More personal insight and understanding when we mention "day jobs" were not always saying we want half the game mundane just more something for us to have to realize at say 5 in the morning and somebody needs to be teaching a class in 2 hours..... its more background flavor for us all to keep in mind but not much more.

Some of threads, while you were in town, seemed to drag, but that could be all of our faults not just the ST's.
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